..let's go..will enjoy and have fun too..
i don't want to witness walk away because here we put the things all together..
..i will make you special..will turn on your feet and we will experience the intrusive moments of togetherness..
..dress up ma color..
..let's forget everything for a while in the shades of ma arm and capture the moments of craziness..
..just be my words, did my words not come out right..
..i never ever leave you with bad memories..trust me..i will douse every moment of your's with fresh life, everyday in everyway..
..take ma hands, take ma life..take off every stress to me and i will make it up everything for you..never let you regret for choosing me over others..
..without you, ma life will turn to ash..and i can see the pain of "i cant live without you"..
..When you come down flaunting with your never ending smile, leaves me weak in the knees..
..hold me, take me deep, did you ever meet this..
..your disdain replying to my question make me dead everytime..
..i am smitten by your charm and the beauty which resides within you which i have realized..
..i offered you ma life, see now, how i am dead in your hand..
..what i need is just a tender touch of your hand..
baap re baap.
ReplyDeleteis this the same post which you have saved in your mobile for almost a month.
i'm impresed and enlightened the way you expressed the deep emotions into simple way.
really i would say that you have something that we guys lacks somewhere.
"i offered you ma life, now see, how i'm dead in your hand". this simple says a lot more than what it seems to be. unbeatable knock.
one or two line will be enough to either make a special moment or propose a girl. ;-) ;-)
you have a deep look up into every emotions.
this is what, i say, is an piece of art.
good and keep it up.
@alok nomanyatau(thankin you in japanse)..
ReplyDeleteN yep! it wz thr in mobil draft 4 almst mor than a month..
Even i'm blown away for ur choosn words 4 me.. ;-) n i'm glad n nw i'm on d moon..hey can u hear me..
N thanx..
Tc of ur blue..huh!!
hi dear lovly1
ReplyDeletebut still i guess its 4 some 1 special
good blog is is full of love, life n rflects distance of miles with some1 n it doesn't matter if u can n transfer the feeings to som1
in words
I kno feelings are more that words can say
loving som1 is as gud as loved by som1
all the very best
@selflessguy yeah, i dint kn' dat it turns out special 4 sm1 bt nw it turnd special..
ReplyDeleteN yeah feelin of to be love z smwat abov to d feelin to love sm1. I dnt kn' hw bt it z smthng lik ths 4 me nw..huh
Amazingly written and very well crafted.....u really pen down your emotions in a manner dat da person reading it is almost reminded of there own intrusive moments:)
ReplyDeleten i knw wat u mean by will njoy n hav fun too;)
by the way i wasnt aware dat u had it store in ur mobile since da past one month....why wernt u posting it:)))
Go on.....
God Bless:)
@vasu thanxx hai ji for ur warm appreciation..
ReplyDeleteN u kn' wat u kn' z not wat i mean by dat..hey bhagwan.. ;-) ;-)
N yeah it wz stored in ma moble 4 quit smtime..bt whn i realized to publish it den i did it..bt im extremly sory dat i dint tel u.. :'( :'(
N i have two more articles in ma mobile to post n im still workin on dem..
N god bless u too..
Tc..
Stay happy n keep waitin 4 orange juice..huh