..I came from blue..was in dark..
come and doused to mug..
bow the beach..
swing to music..
as i want you to be..
so don't go little so soon..
..You give yourself away..
memories have disappeared in the gleam..
see the stones in your eyes..
..Don't spring me to cry round the reasons that have died..
there were no way unless it wasn't yours..
do not speak to me about life, colors and sanicity..
..I hate recalling how you said all and what you are now..
it was so young but all dead now..
..Hold me and feel the fierce of dead skin..
so better stop me and ease the pain tonight..
..I've hours but only lonely..
my love was virgin and still blind..
..Wake up and dig inside you..
and still can't speak to me..
now, see how most of us died alone..
..You are dead now behind your blue eyes..
..oO.
wow..!
ReplyDeletestunning..!
Pratik was right...stunning...kafi neat and clean post hai...
ReplyDeleteBlessings and keep some posts like this only...you know better why...lol@u
Wonderful and expresive.
ReplyDeleteI appriciate the way you express yourself and generally where we take so much of space to explain the things you just finish it off in just two lines.
Don't go out soon as its so beautiful to swing to music...
for it touches all senses right...!
Please, in spring we need to be happy as its a blossam and to cry is not a matter of fact, laughter and tears are the head and tail of the same coin. That's why you need to hold me tight for i need to live my life in present though we will face that one day.
In blues, we came from blue which is symbol of purity and holiness. wow it's amazing! that we are blessed it upon this beautiful earth. Look people doesn't care what we are and in need.
What people think of blues is another sense as well virginity too. But it's all about love and truthfulness, trusting the trust is all about virginity. Yes, why i'm confused is people always think to play with mug is only for kids. Offcourse it's all for us. In reality, we all came from dust and will go to dust, still one is in confuse because they are fear of it.
Fear is a word which you hear in the dark but you are in the light so why you put yourself in fear.
Blues..sky is blue! and no one is blue..why?? for we are like bubbles and foam of the blues.
And really you came from blue, color of love, but you were never in dark.
I think you love and like the way i express about your feelings..?
"Happy"!
To : pratik
ReplyDeletethanx dude..you always welcome with or without anything..
Now check out this again..you might find it cluttered..
Thanx again
n god bless you
To my lovely sis :
ReplyDeleteEven you are always welcome for nothing in exchange..
I know your blessings are always with me and so i don't need to think much about you though i care for you..
And please nxt time se kuch post ke liya bhi likh dena othrws thre is no need to be your bro..
Love you..
Take care..
To Meiteiamo :
ReplyDeleteThanx dear and i must appriciate you first for your deep insight to my feelings. Though i never felt in such a way but somehow i have come up with this post..
Really, i'm glad to hear the way you explaination of my understanding of my post. You gave me an another view of seeing "snow cover dream to bed of roses". What i like the most in your expression is "we all came from dust and will go to dust". If you ask me it is something you have imagined but that i didn't though i put the same in my way i.e "i came from blue..was in dark" and "now you are dead behind your blue eyes" i.e. From blue to blue eyes..
I'm also glad to hear about the understanding you have captured the very literal meaning of virginity as i mentioned "i was virgin". I really mean it what you have expressed. It's really about trust..
As we know, spring and cry don't go hand in hand but why i put it together i.e."don't spring me to cry round the reasons that have died" b'cause love and hate don't go all together. If your love is eternal, you couldn't think off to get away of your love.
And really no one wants to leave when you want to feel someone's existance in you..and so you don't want her to go off for that time being..and so you put the mild music on to swing, bow the beach..
Atlast to express, the way you crafted your thoughts, i'm really happy that how well you catches my emotions..
I hope that i express your thoughts in my way..
Wish to hear more from you..
God bless you
take care
Lovely one, so many things in just few words. Every line, every word is saying something. I read it thrice and also read it before, but still i'm trying to end it with my conclution. Though it happens in everyone's life, and it is not like that she is not in pain. I guess your last few lines "you are dead behind your blue eyes" is saying something what i did say. Isn't..??
ReplyDelete@alok evn i dint kn' hw cum i cud write like such..evn i get insipird many tim aftr readin it
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